Holy crap, I know not too many people read this blog, so there’s my excuse for not posting more…but jeez, August went by in a flash and now September is half gone too. However there have been a lot of improvements, despite the fact that the goal posts keep moving. Just today, Tiffany dropped the … Read more

It’s still not quite where I want it to be in terms of quality but it’s getting close. https://vimeo.com/581377875

I’ve been a fan of Steve Dotto and his Youtube DottoTech channel for quite a while. In fact I remember watching him on tv in the 90’s, when he taught people stuff like how to connect your pc to a printer! Now he has a channel called the “Grey Wave”. It’s for older folks who … Read more

I just watched an interview with Quentin Tarantino, who offered up his top 10 tips for screenwriters. One really struck me! I think it was tip #9: Force your characters to make moral decisions. That one really has my head spinning as being something I/we need to do. Lou already has two moral decisions to … Read more

Finally it’s up on YouTube! And we only missed the deadline by 2 days… However, I already see areas that could use some improvement. The opening scene should probably move a little quicker in order to hook the viewers. As of this writing, we have 40 visits on Youtube and the average view time is … Read more

YouTube Channel Launched

How could this story possibly be complete without a warden for the prison? A zoom meeting between myself, Ryan and Kathy brought this subject to light and gave birth to warden Jones, who has his eye on running for Governor of Nevada. When the warden gets a call from the commissioner, requesting/demanding, that he find … Read more

And I just made some more changes/revisions to the dialogue between Brad and Jayne during their car ride to Gatesville – and Lou’s monologue while he is looking over the grand canyon. Check it out, it’s on page 18 of today’s script… Brad and Jayne’s dialogue is pages 14-16

Ryan is back pumping out slides everyday, Kathy has tweaked the script and her lines a bit, and Jennifer is set to give me advice on any major script revisions this coming Sunday (May 2). So the goal posts are coming into view. Prior to launch, we need to: Finalize the storyboard matching slides to … Read more

OK, have some good news and some bad news. Good news: the script has been updated – link is on the “Brutal Blue Scripts” page. Bad news: there’s more ideas coming down the chute, so things are bound to change again. As far as the characters go, the big news is the addition of MANNY, … Read more